At every sunset
when cars in the metropolis
on the streets,
yes, I look deeper
into the gloom
of my heart,
and see in
of my childhood:
of things past.'
from IN LOVE WITH A GORGON (2010)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I appreciate the theme and also the way you have put it. I agree with Ma'am Gina,
on the street' - this was a specially strong image.
But then I can't help disapproving the extra-ordinary fast pace of this poem. Could have gone a little more with one's breath...leaves one panting!
Still a nice work.
A well-drawn picture of a person's recollections amidst a busy, racing world. The 'wheeled beetles' thing is sharp. I offer you 9 marks for this strong piece of writing, Sofiul. With warmth, Gina.
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