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****renee

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I wish you strength
to rise
Whenever you fall
Reason and learn
whenever you err
I wish you freedom
when guilt enchains you
And more than any thing
else
I wish you love
trust me!
Its all I really have!

Wrote this a month before my eldest daughter was born; sending it to her sibling! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Delta 26 May 2008

this is so tender.. i can imagine you giving this to your daughter on her graduation :)

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David Desantis 20 May 2008

very beautiful man...congrats on your daughter, she will be proud of this one.

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Indira Babbellapati 20 May 2008

very encouraging wish esp. for a girl child...i lv baby-girls, rehan!

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Waqas Naeem 15 May 2008

very nice thoughtful words of advice and love!

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Flora Gillingham 10 May 2008

A beautiful gift to a child. A lovely write. Fx

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