Reply To Shoo Poem by Bano Ali

Reply To Shoo

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Having passed fifty years with you
I now agree with you.
I regret why I couldn't reply only Shoo.
Perhaps I loved you
and I still love you.
But the only difference I see in you,
the teller of lies
has now become a writer of lies!

Saturday, May 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: old
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 25 January 2019

Congrats! A very interesting poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 May 2017

I love this reply, but my lies are more beautiful than the ugly truths.

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Rajnish Manga 13 May 2017

Shoo & Jawab-e-shoo shows the extent of mutual respect and understanding between the King and the Queen of Heart. Great expression. Thanks.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 January 2019

Congrats on being poet of the day! A liar has become a writer of lies...Interesting lines tinged with a dash of bitterness...Well, a fiction writer does have to make up a lot of things, but the person needn't be a liar in real life...

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 May 2017

This is beautiful. Shows you have a blessed life with mutual respect and love. Loved the way you expressed it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 March 2019

badi muddat kay baad aaj yaad ayah woh zamana SHAKILA bANO NEY KAHA EK PHARMANA WOH AYEY HAI DAIR SEY PAR AYAY HAIN DRUST UNKAY LIYE ABH KAHENGAY DOE CHAAR NAZMEINN ZARROR hoe kay muzboor AND SHE SAT DOWN AGAIN IN MY HONOUR FIFTY YEARS gone down memory lane

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Khairul Ahsan 25 January 2019

Read this poem earlier and commented on it. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! 'the teller of lies has now become a writer of lies! ' - apparently scornful, yet, like some other readers, I too can see some love in the poem for the 'writer of lies'.

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Amir Marandi 25 January 2019

Such a sad realization of reality and truth. Hoping for a shining star showing you the path to happiness. Congrats for POD.

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Benjamin Uy 25 January 2019

Teller of lies, writer of lies, Great poem thanking you

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Comment #5 25 January 2019

Another shower another day. I really do feel clean after a wash. Now, what was I thinking about?

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