Reply To Shoo Poem by Bano Ali
Reply To Shoo
Having passed fifty years with you
I now agree with you.
I regret why I couldn't reply only Shoo.
Perhaps I loved you
and I still love you.
But the only difference I see in you,
the teller of lies
has now become a writer of lies!
I love this reply, but my lies are more beautiful than the ugly truths.
Shoo & Jawab-e-shoo shows the extent of mutual respect and understanding between the King and the Queen of Heart. Great expression. Thanks.
Congrats on being poet of the day! A liar has become a writer of lies...Interesting lines tinged with a dash of bitterness...Well, a fiction writer does have to make up a lot of things, but the person needn't be a liar in real life...
This is beautiful. Shows you have a blessed life with mutual respect and love. Loved the way you expressed it.
badi muddat kay baad aaj yaad ayah woh zamana SHAKILA bANO NEY KAHA EK PHARMANA WOH AYEY HAI DAIR SEY PAR AYAY HAIN DRUST UNKAY LIYE ABH KAHENGAY DOE CHAAR NAZMEINN ZARROR hoe kay muzboor AND SHE SAT DOWN AGAIN IN MY HONOUR FIFTY YEARS gone down memory lane
Read this poem earlier and commented on it. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! 'the teller of lies has now become a writer of lies! ' - apparently scornful, yet, like some other readers, I too can see some love in the poem for the 'writer of lies'.
Such a sad realization of reality and truth. Hoping for a shining star showing you the path to happiness. Congrats for POD.
Another shower another day. I really do feel clean after a wash. Now, what was I thinking about?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Congrats! A very interesting poem.