Tanhai Poem by Bano Ali

Tanhai

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Tapti ret pe chalte chalte,
Jab bhi peeche mud kar dekha,
Tez hawa ke garm bagoole,
Peeche peeche ret udate,
Naqsh kafe pa mera mitate,
Mere taaqub mein the rawan phir,
Peeche mere koi kaise aata,
Aage bahot thee main badh aai,
Peeche nishan bhi koi na choota,
Kaun kisi ko rah dikhata,
Sath mere koi kaise chalta,
Maine chalna sath kisi ke,
Khud hi na seekha,
Khud hi na chaha,
Dhun mein aage badh jane ki,
Maine sabka sath ganwaya,
Ret ki aandhi aisi uthi,
Rah ganwai aabla pa hoon,
Dhoondh rahi hoon apni manzil,
Meri ana ne mujhko bakhsha,
Tohfa yeh tanhai ka!

Tuesday, July 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 01 July 2014

Bahut umdah nazm hay, bahut pasand aai.

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Priyanshi Dass 02 July 2014

Bahut hi khoobsurti se likha he aapne. Bilkul shaandaar.

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Free Bird 12 July 2014

deep feelings in yours words has made ur poetry like awsoume!

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* Sunprincess * 29 August 2014

...............beautifully written.....thanks for sharing this write...

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Ramesh Rai 14 September 2014

A very much inspiring write. Thanks for share. Regards

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2019

behad khubsurat nazm. Insani rishto'n ko halaat ki majbooriya'n kaise mutassir karti hain, iski achhi akkasi ki gayi hai. Bahut shukriya.

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M Asim Nehal 25 January 2019

Wah wah akelepan ka ek ehsaas behtareen tareeqe se apne bayan kiya, Maza aagaya 10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2018

Ret ki aandhi aisi uthi, Rah ganwai aabla pa hoon, Dhoondh rahi hoon apni manzil, Meri ana ne mujhko bakhsha, Tohfa yeh tanhai ka! ........touching expression. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Sahil Sharma 05 June 2015

Bhut acha tnhai ja aalm

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2015

Beautiful lines.... Ret ki aandhi aisi uthi, Rah ganwai aabla pa hoon, Dhoondh rahi hoon apni manzil, Meri ana ne mujhko bakhsha, Tohfa yeh tanhai ka! Fantastic poem. Each lines depicted very well. Loved it.

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