Repressive Recklessness Poem by Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Repressive Recklessness

Rating: 4.6


Irresponsibility has been an enemy to me
I am not even close to where I should be
I find myself drifting like a log on the sea
Oh Mr. Responsibility hear my desperate plea

Irresponsibility has caused me excruciating pain
I wonder if I'll ever recover and make some gain
I am like an air craft tumbling towards the ground
Oh Mr. Responsibility please help me turn around

Irresponsibility has been my down fall
Instead of progressing I have had to crawl
Irresponsibility has held me down for too long
I am terribly tired of singing the losers song

I take responsibility for my life today
Irresponsibility will never again hold sway

Sunday, December 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 02 May 2010

Howard, most of us have experienced irresponsibility, your poem remindes us not to go there again. Thanks for the reminder. Your friend Lynn

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Chantal Gumbs 04 April 2010

Mr. Irresponsibility is the most wanted criminal in this world right now! ! He has damaged too many lives! I hope we all come to a realisation that he is the enemy and change for the bettering of ourselves is Great! ! Wonderful Poem!

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Ruth Walters 25 February 2014

Ah but what pleasure to drift when all others are hauling such torments ;) pausing only to relieve a passing stranger of his pain.......

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Rinki Nandy 13 July 2010

mr. resposibilty sure must be happy as you........euphoric,

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Thomas Dooley 14 September 2020

Sounds great, I like the rhyming texture

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 August 2018

A great poem full of positivity.It imparts wisdom and lesson in life. A very perceptive write that inspires and motivates. Superbly penned.10++++

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Rose, blessed gratitude and good will for you kind affirmation always!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

Irresponsibility has caused me excruciating pain I wonder if I’ll ever recover and make some gain.........my great pleasure contemplating the fabulous expression my friend! It's an extraordinary piece of work!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 May 2018

A magnificent piece of poetry! Extremely well penned my friend! Full marks (10/10) !

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2017

i shall place your name and the link to this fine poem into July 2017's 'a showcase for and by PH poets'. Thanks. bri :)

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