Repressive Recklessness Poem by Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Repressive Recklessness

Rating: 4.6


Irresponsibility has been an enemy to me
I am not even close to where I should be
I find myself drifting like a log on the sea
Oh Mr. Responsibility hear my desperate plea

Irresponsibility has caused me excruciating pain
I wonder if I'll ever recover and make some gain
I am like an air craft tumbling towards the ground
Oh Mr. Responsibility please help me turn around

Irresponsibility has been my down fall
Instead of progressing I have had to crawl
Irresponsibility has held me down for too long
I am terribly tired of singing the losers song

I take responsibility for my life today
Irresponsibility will never again hold sway

Sunday, December 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chantal Gumbs 04 April 2010

Mr. Irresponsibility is the most wanted criminal in this world right now! ! He has damaged too many lives! I hope we all come to a realisation that he is the enemy and change for the bettering of ourselves is Great! ! Wonderful Poem!

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Lynn Glover 02 May 2010

Howard, most of us have experienced irresponsibility, your poem remindes us not to go there again. Thanks for the reminder. Your friend Lynn

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Ruth Walters 25 February 2014

Ah but what pleasure to drift when all others are hauling such torments ;) pausing only to relieve a passing stranger of his pain.......

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Rinki Nandy 13 July 2010

mr. resposibilty sure must be happy as you........euphoric,

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Thomas Dooley 14 September 2020

Sounds great, I like the rhyming texture

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 August 2018

A great poem full of positivity.It imparts wisdom and lesson in life. A very perceptive write that inspires and motivates. Superbly penned.10++++

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Rose, blessed gratitude and good will for you kind affirmation always!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

Irresponsibility has caused me excruciating pain I wonder if I’ll ever recover and make some gain.........my great pleasure contemplating the fabulous expression my friend! It's an extraordinary piece of work!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 May 2018

A magnificent piece of poetry! Extremely well penned my friend! Full marks (10/10) !

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2017

i shall place your name and the link to this fine poem into July 2017's 'a showcase for and by PH poets'. Thanks. bri :)

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