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Progressive Rolling

Rating: 4.4

I saw some rocks
Skipping down hill
They jumped so joyfully
It gave me a thrill

Dislodged by falling rain
They seemed so proud to be free
They seemed to have been aware
Of their brand new destiny

Like rolling rocks
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kyvin nash 14 January 2021

Good poem, motivational as well, thank for sharing Sir H.S

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Luke Hobbs 01 September 2018

The childlike inquisitiveness and joy of the moment are infectious in this poem. I live in a place where I've been fortunate to see many rocks that were proud to be free... and have helped free a few, just for the fun of watching. The personification just pulls you right into the experience of being there.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2018

This wonderful write will find its way in any class of readers and even those who cannot understand or hate poetry, this poem will find its way to their hearts because of the clarity, beauty and wonderful message it delivers.10+++ and on to my Poem List.

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Gratitude for your kind affirmations Rose. May you always and forever be empowered!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2018

The penultimate stanza and the final stanza are so moving. The way you pen your poems are so clear that even an ordinary layman could understand the meaning and wisdom of this write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2018

One of the most inspring poems I have ever read aside from your best poem, I Choose The Mountain and Something Big. What a brilliant write. You were able to conceive a poem on rolling rocks. Only a great poet can formulate such idea and weave them into a marvelous poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2018

The third stanza invokes human beings to embrace every turn and tumble of life! The conclusive stanza provides a strong message to us that even after being removed from a top position, we should not lose heart rather we should enjoy life like a piece of rolling rock and Keep on progressing without losing heart, with a ‘never say die’ attitude! What a beautiful poem! Well penned my friend!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2018

.....‘I saw some rocks skipping down hill’. The poet is absolutely thrilled with the rolling rocks! What a keen sense of observation! In the second stanza, I find a sense of joy of the rocks that are having a sublime bath and cherishing their freedom! (cont..)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2018

‘I saw some rocks skipping down hill’. The poet is absolutely thrilled with the rolling rocks! What a keen sense of observation! In the second stanza, I find a sense of joy of the rocks that are having a sublime bath and cherishing their freedom! (cont..)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 September 2017

Like rolling rocks..Be on the move/ Every turn and tumble/Your position to improve..Wonderful! Such a great poem! Congrats! !

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Obigod Chidi Cece 28 March 2017

Yes, you have the eyes of a genius.

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