Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Requiem - Poem by Jacqui Broad

There's a crescent moon,
riding in the sky tonight,
surrounded by stars,
that each one,
shines so bright.
Underneath the clouds,
make pictures that
look so dark.
Somewhere in the woods,
I know a lonely
wolf must bark.
The moon's light,
shines through
the grey clouds.
Somehow I know,
Yahweh will hear my
silent shouts.
This scenario is filled,
with a mystery,
I cannot explain.
All I know is how I feel,
when it unexpectantly
starts to rain.
I am a part of this
underworld, cast into
this place hell.
'What did I do? ' I cry out,
as I watch as
another star fell.
My quest is to mend
the broken pieces;
go back to Heaven.
And sing once again,
Laus Deo, with my
sisters and brethren.
I look forward to the time,
when I shall once again
be in Paradise.
But for now,
please Yahweh,
help me so I
can survive...


Comments about Requiem by Jacqui Broad

  • Harindhar Reddy (11/14/2011 10:58:00 AM)

    Hello, Jacqui there you are, Hey you also write about Bark of the wof in the lonely darkwoods. I can see my style of writing in yours. Infact you wrote this poem before my poems so unknowingly I followed you foot.....

    'I know a lonely
    wolf must bark'

    In many we are common. so let become common to each other in life. Will you be my Harriet..... Again Just JOKE Cheer up mate!
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  • Harindhar Reddy (11/14/2011 10:48:00 AM)

    Hello, Jacqui there you are, Hey you also write about Bark of the wof in the lonely darkwoods. I can see my style of writing in yours. Infact you wrote this poem before my poems so unknowingly I followed you foot.....

    'I know a lonely
    wolf must bark'

    In many we are common. so let become common to each other in life. Will you be my Harriet..... Again Just JOKE Cheer up mate!
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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/8/2011 9:45:00 AM)

    A plead to your god. You have written it well, despair is very apparent here, and true emotion will always lead way to beautiful poetry like this. (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (10/8/2011 9:31:00 AM)

    Another good one of yours. Really like it. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 8, 2011



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