Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Nothing... - Poem by Jacqui Broad

Looking for something to write,
I lay awake late at night.
Sometimes I see dawn changing the sky.
I have stopped asking the oblivious 'Why? '
No questions, no answers, no satisfaction.
Don't confuse movement with action.
I cannot move my hand to write,
so, I cannot close my eyes at night...

Comments about Nothing... by Jacqui Broad

  • (12/29/2011 6:41:00 PM)

    storm clouds have to gather before the storm... love your poetry! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/29/2011 5:05:00 PM)

    This poem goes with my poem shared here OF POETRY AND PROSE. After 10 years of white paper, a friend had inspired me to write again...Inspiration is always there...poets need the right moment...A very good pen, I love this poem. Thank you Jacqui for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 12:08:00 PM)

    I cannot move my hand to write,
    so, I cannot close my eyes at night...

    With poems like these you always stay in the hearts of all the poets. To you are the star, you are the sun, you are the moon, you are my angel, you are my African dove, you are my love fountain, you are this... you are that.... you are my lifeline!
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  • (12/28/2011 11:03:00 AM)

    a very good poem to read and think... (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (12/28/2011 6:54:00 AM)

    A very nice expression of emptiness, Jacqui.
    Very recognisable state of searching for meaning.

    I have expereienced sometimes, that the harder we search, the more difficult to find, the harder we chase, the faster it runs.
    And then, if we stop our chase for a while, it lands as a butterfly in our hands.

    What a wonderful poem. A great expression of true feelings.
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  • Rigzin Namgyal (12/24/2011 4:27:00 AM)

    ..i am giving u a perfect 10 for this great piece.. (Report) Reply

  • Rigzin Namgyal (12/24/2011 4:25:00 AM)

    ..writers never have vacations..hahaha..
    ..again a great one.. :)
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  • Federico del Corazón (12/23/2011 12:05:00 PM)

    I have spent many sleepless nights but like the stars in the sky’s we are not alone. Each of us shining bright and full of life. My poet friends are my galaxy (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (12/23/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    Emptiness has filled the air but the scent still rules.. Nice write Jacqui.. take care my dear friend :) (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/23/2011 2:58:00 AM)

    It's an excellent write! !
    When I lose hope and feel the blues, I do write something! !
    I like night season-the perfect time for me to write something! ! ! ! !
    'Tis a good poem! ! 10+++++
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  • (12/22/2011 2:03:00 PM)

    Its lovely J....especialy coz every poet can realy relate to it...i like it mngani. (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    Really like this, i know what your saying.
    A great poem.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    For Paul Blackburn. Its a true story.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011

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