Rhyming Practice Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Rhyming Practice

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Would someone please tell
why a terrible smell
tends to follow no laws
and ignores eehs and aaaws
why it hangs in the air
as if wanting its share
of our closest attention
I just wanted to mention
that the odour of fish
and the smelly old quiche
of the Longhorns down south
still falls out of her mouth.
If you notice the smell
hold your nostrils and yell
it's a choice, hell or heaven
my AK-forty-seven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 02 October 2005

Now, now Herbert what did I tell you about playing with your guns......nice write!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 October 2005

Yes, Lawrence, but that smell is following you around as well.....: -)) H

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 October 2005

I like this, Herbert!

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