Rice Being Cooked Poem by wabi sabi

Rice Being Cooked

Rating: 5.0


warm
steamy
bubbling

knocking the lid of the pot

vital
bright
shiny rice makes a living room

sweet as many times as I bite
fun as family gets together eating

mom, I want to see you
smelling rice being cooked

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanav Justa 09 December 2012

Made it look so simple ... nice work

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Unwritten Soul 23 September 2012

Simple but it really enjoyable...the taste of the nicest rice taste by us in each word you spell here..sound special to your beloved mom...._Unwritten Soul

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Danny Draper 20 September 2012

Great vitality and succinct simplicity, the theme is genuine and makes one feel invited in to your home to share your rice and happy place.

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