Konjit Berhane

Rookie (SePTeMBer,18 1983 DEath i Believe i am ImMorTal / a S M a R a)

Rich Wind - Poem by Konjit Berhane

The rich wind with golden dust
Has been going wild and fast
As if it has a life that’ll forever last

The rich wind
With its sound so loud
To scare people or make them sad
But living is not so easy as I had
Never been scared by rich wild wind
Or by the redness of blood
Or would I ever have?

Comments about Rich Wind by Konjit Berhane

  • (3/31/2006 2:30:00 AM)

    I wish steal few lines from this poem to keep in my loving memories (Report) Reply

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  • (3/8/2006 9:19:00 AM)

    I can see nice wind of feelings from your poem.Very sweet and good flow.
    I liked it.I got nice imagery in it.
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  • (8/7/2005 4:17:00 AM)

    simple yet effective (Report) Reply

  • (7/25/2005 10:08:00 AM)

    You know, I like the mood and the feel ofthis one...maybe not very poetically analytical words but that's just the way I read :) I think you could give it a little more impact though if you chose some stronger verbs to carry your imagery and the last line had me a bit confused. Did you mean..or would I ever be? ? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 20, 2005

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