Right Path Poem by Lamar Cole

Right Path

Rating: 5.0


The man who sailed around his soul.
He found himself in a prison hole.
He took the wrong turn in life.
And he lived by the gun and knife.
If he had taken a path that was right.
He wouldn't be in this dark hole tonight.

Wednesday, January 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 31 January 2019

yeah; absolutely written- If he had taken a path that was right. He wouldn't be in this dark hole tonight. // beautiful poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 January 2019

Another magnificent write, Lamar....10++++

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Gajanan Mishra 30 January 2019

One has to take right path, good write

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Practicing Poetess 30 January 2019

Words of truth, Lamar!

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