Ring Of Friendship Poem by jane blaxter

Ring Of Friendship

Rating: 4.9


This ring;
two circles intertwined;
a symbol
of our everlasting friendship

Joy…
At the jokes we share; no one else can understand.
Cheering messages, as we know
when one of us feels low…

Love…
Those special silent moments; no need for spoken words.
Hug that soothes and heals,
knowing how the other feels…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
jack russell 30 December 2006

Lovely sentiments, Jane. Unspoken 'words' are often the most heartfelt. Two people completely in synch! I like this very much :) jack.

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Frank Bana 30 December 2006

Jane, very beautiful, wonderfully written! Frank

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Jerry Hughes 30 December 2006

Thoroughly agree with Doc, Frank and Jack, more please?

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Jim Foulk 31 December 2006

very good poem, keep writting you do have some tatent.

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Terrance Woolridge 06 April 2007

Nice writing Jane

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Not a member No 4 22 February 2007

Very moving and deceptively simple looking - the sign of skill. Great work. jim

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Marvin Brato 22 February 2007

Sentiments well-described Jane in this piece. write more. Regards.

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Ratneswar Brahmachari 17 January 2007

Hi Jane, Such a touchy moment and how nicely u managed to convey ur feeling to readers! Words in the lexicon r not sufficient to congratulate ur style! In the Vastness of space and immensity of time ur words will survive for ever! U have immense latent tallent, express out, write more for us! Ratneswar Brahmachari ratneswarbrahmachari@yahoo.com

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R H 12 January 2007

Wonderful sentiment here Jane, you have conveyed the unity that two people can share through both heart and mind. Kind regards, Justine.

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