Rise And Fall (Inspired By A Post Of Marie Shine) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Rise And Fall (Inspired By A Post Of Marie Shine)

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When water falls it's a joy,
when a man falls it's sad.
When a man rises he is an Angel,
how he becomes a Devil in his falls,
I wonder!
My wonder didn't prolong,
I changed my dress for an outing,
and to dress my hairs,
with a comb in my hands,
when I saw the mirror,
my image smiled at me!
I placed the comb at its place,
I shall not go for the outing,
I am afraid many others will smile at me.

Rise And Fall (Inspired By A Post Of Marie Shine)
Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: falling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 July 2018

AS long as people smile is alright be happy at least they smile once in a way most have swollen faces all day

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Khalid Saifullah 03 July 2018

A great philosophic poem, liked it.

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Red Soul 03 July 2018

I wish we judged people and everything else in a more proper manner than what we usually do. Life is usually full of beauty even when we don't understand it. Nature is pristine and dangerous, much like humans. Humans are humane and cruel much like every other creature. A wonderful poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 July 2018

These two falling have morality -yeah if water falls from mountain as fountain or from sky as rain then it is graceful but when these water flood the world then it is ferocious for everyone. and Exactly when lofty and moral human(as Adam, Eve to Mohammad) comes down then these coming or falling is benedictions for us but when wicked human (as like Hitlar) comes down then these coming or falling is curse for us. ........ great Mind and Man great thought

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