M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Risen - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Now the dust of my fear has settled
Making my creativity blossomed

I am thinking about you in new ways
I know you will not disappoint me

Yet the past warns me to remain watchful
My innocent heart understands not

I burnt my skin to save you several times
You went past without giving a look

My love forces me to take this bold step
Again and again as I know not why?

You pushed me to the corner to retaliate
I gathered my courage to fight back

Time will reveal the truth which I carry
With all my love I have risen again.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, religion, world peace

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Risen by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/29/2015 1:53:00 AM)


    Time is the teller of truth and you did it with this poem..10 (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/27/2015 11:32:00 PM)


    Time will reveal the truth which I carry
    With all my love I have risen again.
    Liked the firm determination painted in this poem.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/27/2015 10:24:00 PM)


    Creativity blossoms like fragrant flowers and fear goes settling emotion. Very deep and thoughtful expression this is. Love carries the love to truth. Very fantastic expression shared really. Amazing sharing....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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