As I lie sleepingmy soul rises, rises into the night skyWatching and waitingfor other souls to come and seethe world as it sleepsKnowing mankindas destroyed it
Not sure the end. But i like your thoughts. Rising to a dream. Can a dream be real?
You might also like my other poem on Hope & Wings of verse..
It touches the heart... congratulations. :)
Teaching the worth of life in this poem. Yes, souls, ghosts can see most probably best the damage of humankind. A wonderful poem.
I can feel the souls as they traverse the night. Nice write. Blessings.
Precious write..love this short piece my nice brother..Good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul
jus a few words with a whole lot of deepth n meaning, i like, i liked it
Provocative and thoughtful...a new way to look at life,
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