poet Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Rising Soul

As I lie sleeping
my soul rises,
rises into the night sky

Watching and waiting
for other souls to come and see
the world as it sleeps

Knowing mankind
as destroyed it

Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 29, 2011

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  • ZuZu GoldZuZu Gold (2/19/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    Not sure the end. But i like your thoughts. Rising to a dream. Can a dream be real?

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  • Seza KaraSeza Kara (1/28/2012 4:55:00 AM)

    You might also like my other poem on Hope & Wings of verse..

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/hope-396/

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  • Seza KaraSeza Kara (1/28/2012 4:46:00 AM)

    It touches the heart... congratulations. :)

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  • Jacqui BroadJacqui Broad (12/31/2011 2:51:00 AM)

    Teaching the worth of life in this poem. Yes, souls, ghosts can see most probably best the damage of humankind. A wonderful poem.

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  • (De Va) (12/30/2011 2:34:00 PM)

    I can feel the souls as they traverse the night. Nice write. Blessings.

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (12/30/2011 1:12:00 PM)

    Precious write..love this short piece my nice brother..Good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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  • Wes Mbanje (12/30/2011 2:22:00 AM)

    jus a few words with a whole lot of deepth n meaning, i like, i liked it

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  • Buxton Shippy (12/29/2011 1:04:00 PM)

    Provocative and thoughtful...a new way to look at life,

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