Rival Blades Poem by David N. Degnan

Rival Blades

Rating: 5.0


Written 6/9/07

Sharp,
Swift as a horse.
Thy blade
Cometh forth.
Malicious Demon,
Heroic Guard.
Clash, fighting
Thus far.

Tempered
By one another.
Each, he owes
His opposing brother.
Sunrise, sun sets
On each new day.
Leaving battle scars
In shadows’ wake.

Blade to blade,
Steel clash.
Each attempt
To surpass.
Both to prove
They are better.
No matter
Damage they weather.

Now,
A new threat has risen.
To Savior and Sinner,
The choice has been given.
Against tyranny, two fists
In the air, in defiance.
Rivals join
In alliance.

Evil lies
In defeat.
And cooperation
Plants a new seed.
Swords in sheaths,
Warriors tread.
Though rivalry
In friendship shan’t end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evaughn Gray 18 July 2007

WOW! that was very powering..and beautiful...i loved it! ~ your friend ~hazel

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Cecelia Warner 15 June 2007

David, You and Adam are two crazy little teens. I know I shouldn't be talkin' with me being a teen myself and with all the weird friends I have. LOL. Anyway, keep up the good work and I'll see you tomorrow. Call me later if you can. Love Always, your favorite older cousin Shannah Banana

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Cecelia Warner 14 June 2007

A poem as terrific as the wonderful nephew I have that wrote it! Love Aunt Cecelia XOXOXO I love you David!

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Lee Degnan 11 June 2007

You two are thick as thieves, that's what I have to let everyone know... great start to your epic, reading on! love ya

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