David N. Degnan

Rookie (March 10,1992 / Peekskill, NY)

Rival Blades - Poem by David N. Degnan

Written 6/9/07

Sharp,
Swift as a horse.
Thy blade
Cometh forth.
Malicious Demon,
Heroic Guard.
Clash, fighting
Thus far.

Tempered
By one another.
Each, he owes
His opposing brother.
Sunrise, sun sets
On each new day.
Leaving battle scars
In shadows’ wake.

Blade to blade,
Steel clash.
Each attempt
To surpass.
Both to prove
They are better.
No matter
Damage they weather.

Now,
A new threat has risen.
To Savior and Sinner,
The choice has been given.
Against tyranny, two fists
In the air, in defiance.
Rivals join
In alliance.

Evil lies
In defeat.
And cooperation
Plants a new seed.
Swords in sheaths,
Warriors tread.
Though rivalry
In friendship shan’t end.


Comments about Rival Blades by David N. Degnan

  • Evaughn Gray (7/18/2007 7:44:00 PM)

    WOW! that was very powering..and beautiful...i loved it! ~ your friend ~hazel (Report) Reply

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  • (6/15/2007 10:43:00 AM)

    David,
    You and Adam are two crazy little teens. I know I shouldn't be talkin' with me being a teen myself and with all the weird friends I have. LOL. Anyway, keep up the good work and I'll see you tomorrow. Call me later if you can.

    Love Always, your favorite older cousin Shannah Banana
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  • (6/14/2007 7:36:00 PM)

    A poem as terrific as the wonderful nephew I have that wrote it!
    Love Aunt Cecelia XOXOXO I love you David!
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  • (6/11/2007 1:38:00 AM)

    You two are thick as thieves, that's what I have to let everyone know... great start to your epic, reading on!
    love ya
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 9, 2011


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