A Night Sky...

Rating: 4.9
As night comes to pass
over my home, my land,
I find myself here,
Alone I stand.
The moonlit earth
Surrounds, engulfs me.
I find in no place other
I'd rather be.
The moon to me,
Fells so empowering.
It's mysterious light
Now showering
Upon me.
I see
Peace of mind.
A place where free, I ride.
I long to fly
In a night sky.

Stars gleam,
So far away...
Only to vanish
With each new day.
Though they return
always as night falls,
Giants so large, in the sky
Seem so very small.
Make the map, in the sky.
For nightly travelers wand’ring
And give life to
Night creatures that sing.

In Nature so kind,
I always find
My peace of mind.
Free I ride,
Alone I fly,
In the night sky…
Saturday, August 25, 2007
Greenwolfe 1962 05 March 2009
I agree with Victoria, that this is a wonderful piece of poetry. The use of language here is particularly good. The rhyme is good too. This was fine to read and worthy of being recommended to others. GW62
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Pandora Chaos 08 April 2008
WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! that was amazing ive never read anything like this its wow. i give it 100% an im gana add this poem to my fav.
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Yekaterina Bezpalaya 27 September 2007
I think that you really put yourself into it.... I can really relate to the imagery behind it.... Superb job! With all the best, Katerina
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Aurora Wells 02 September 2007
Ya know.. I only have one question... do you think Mom is ever gonna be ready to give you up? Cause that kind of talk can really get to a girl... The beauty in words can only be created by a beautiful person.. and you, my dear nephew, are one absolutely beautiful person! ! Keep up the awesome work hun... cause we need all the beauty in this world we can get. Love ya!
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Cecelia Warner 28 August 2007
I gave you a 10 although it doesn't do any justice to a truly poetic mind! This was the most awesome poem I've read in a while. It also shows the romantic side of such a wonderfully talented young man. Love ya!
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Lee Degnan 27 August 2007
Beautiful write, son... interesting, I found that while reading this, it gave a very satisfying, kind of primal feel to it, and was not sure if the narrator was human or animal... the genius is, is that the poem can be taken either way! I enjoy the fact that you revel in nature's beauty and incorporated your senses of sound and sight to heighten that...10 plus to my fav poet! MA.
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Evaughn Gray 26 August 2007
that was so beautiful..it gives you a peace of mind it makes you think of all the wonders in the world.your such a good writer..~hazel
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