Roads (Senryu) Poem by Butch Decatoria

Roads (Senryu)

Rating: 4.9


Where all walks begin.
Some are quick to find its end.
Wise keeps journeying.

Roads (Senryu)
Friday, August 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,journey,life,roads,senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 04 August 2018

Another sublime senryu, Butch...10++++

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Butch Decatoria 04 August 2018

Thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2018

Where all walks begin. Some are quick to find its end. Wise keeps journeying...........impressive expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem on journey nicely executed. Enjoyed with photo provided.10

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 August 2018

Excellent senryu and substantial depth.

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Butch Decatoria 03 August 2018

Salamat po. Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to enjoy and comment. Thanks again.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 December 2019

yeah no end there is some wanna make the end and some become wise here

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 June 2019

beautiful expression......................

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 February 2019

Brilliant lines in its simplicity. A powerful and insightful write on life. Like the picture that goes with the poem. It enhances the beauty of this write. Very creative. The sky and sea were mingled creating an extraordinary scene.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 25 January 2019

a well written haiku! rodes showing the light and three different views to road, the life. such a beautiful poem.(*****)

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

Our journey continues with every passing breath... simple yet deep...

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Butch Decatoria

Butch Decatoria

Olongapo City, Philippines
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