Roaring clouds gather
makes me all remember
the days which had special feeling
where no walls had any peeling
Everyday new ideas hatch
nowhere could be found a scratch
Colourful flowers were in bloom
nobody seemed to be in gloom
Rain showered its happiness
then who could think of drowsiness? ?
All night moon and stars shine
thought never occured of dying.
Everything seemed to be so known
there was no feeling of being a vagabond.
Roaring clouds still gather
time has changed..its a different matter.
~13/08/08~
roaraing clouds..fine metaphor used to describe the cyclic nature of life...don't worry some day these roaring clouds will begin to pour to wash away the humdrum of life.
A beautiful imagery floating positive attitude....a sure 10
it is all cyclic, Deepti...things get repeated...watch out what happens after the present gathering of roaring clouds...good write 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
10 for this lovely verse. Love it. Wonderful metaphors.