Roaring Clouds Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Roaring Clouds

Rating: 5.0


Roaring clouds gather
makes me all remember
the days which had special feeling
where no walls had any peeling

Everyday new ideas hatch
nowhere could be found a scratch

Colourful flowers were in bloom
nobody seemed to be in gloom

Rain showered its happiness
then who could think of drowsiness? ?

All night moon and stars shine
thought never occured of dying.

Everything seemed to be so known
there was no feeling of being a vagabond.

Roaring clouds still gather
time has changed..its a different matter.

~13/08/08~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

10 for this lovely verse. Love it. Wonderful metaphors.

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Chitra - 04 September 2008

roaraing clouds..fine metaphor used to describe the cyclic nature of life...don't worry some day these roaring clouds will begin to pour to wash away the humdrum of life.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2008

A beautiful imagery floating positive attitude....a sure 10

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Kesav Easwaran 25 August 2008

it is all cyclic, Deepti...things get repeated...watch out what happens after the present gathering of roaring clouds...good write 10

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