River Poem by Deepti Agarwal

River

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Glaciers melts
resulting rivers..
river flows
with all its glow..
crosses the hills
never being still..
reaches the plains
seems ready to slain..
mingles with the sea
its now, all free..! !

~~07/05/08~~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 31 August 2009

The river flows and melts in the Sea and in the process providing so much to the nature and its inhabitants. But in monsoon season, it can be quite different....

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Vidi Writes 07 May 2008

Dear poet, I relate this River to my life... Where i m born How i lived Which's my path How much high, how much low i travelled Whats my aim Where is my achievement And finally where will i end? ? This poem brought me on my kneel To introspect. Nice one. Thank you.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 May 2008

river can be friendly and could be enemy............hen they 'd become out of control. a good lesson for all.keep up deepti.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 May 2008

a good poem deepti, ...good resonance of words here..

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