Romance With The Rain.. Poem by Arfa Iris

Romance With The Rain..

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Touch of rain drops makes me giggle.

like a lover, it tickle.

and makes me laugh and wiggle

rain touches me with a bliss.

like a sweet and lovely kiss.

when in rain i get drench.

like lover my clothes clench.

its like someone dear
.
who cuddle close and near.

the cold tender breeze.

makes me shiver and freeze.

still its better than a hot mug.

or a tight warm hug
.
rain makes me romantic.

and i feel naively idyllic.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 14 October 2011

Good poem, i like it. Good write.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 14 October 2011

Good poem arfa, rain makes me feel drowsy and lousy. As if to say what a horrible day. Only when the sun comes out will I feel better. Romance comes to me upon the night. A dance with stars under a dim light. But never a grey cloud in sight.

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Michael Oliver 14 October 2011

an innocent poem, charming and full life. a delight to read and experience

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Hina Firdose 15 October 2011

Hi, Arfa! That's a nice one......I see ur mood's very romantic here.....n rains indeed make u one

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Vipins Puthooran 16 October 2011

It's a wonderful poem, i like thhe mood of this poem.... Appreciable write!

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Christine Blaydes 02 November 2011

I like it. It's young and real

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Aqeb Benazir 16 October 2011

wonderful! ! very refreshing and motivating thoughts.

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 16 October 2011

wow this is amazing very detailed

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Osman Gani 16 October 2011

well, this is nice to. i liked you romance with the rain through words too. Nice romantic expressions. thanks for sharing.

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 October 2011

Amazing! very well written poem. Keep writing. 10+

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Arfa Iris

Arfa Iris

hyderabad, A.P, India.
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