Rhyming I see you.
O rose of pink colours,
soul's beauty in your fragrance
ecstatic I see the whole world is.
Make it up
all that I see is ugly,
rusted beliefs,
ideologies stale,
evolutionary are your revolutionary rhymes.
Join the whole world
Europe, Africa, Australia
America and Asia.
Nightingales everywhere will sing for you.
And I see your poems are erasing
ugliness of hate
selfish nationalism
terror and proxy wars.
Insight of a poetess like you
needs the whole world to be beautiful once again.
I am deeply honored and humbled by the wonderful comments of Robert M. Smith and.Dr. Dillip Swain.They also gave me inspiration in all my Poetry works.
Beautifully written poem. A poem that I will cherish more than life.itself. Thank you, Sir Akhtar You made my stay here at Poem Hunter great and wonderful. I want to take this opportunity that your comment on my poem " Your Love Is Like The Briefness. of Tulips had.been imbibed in my mind like a mantra that instigate me to strive and write poems of value. A million thanks again and.may you be blessed with all the joys that life brings...I wish you nothing but the best in life.
In my entire stay here at Poem Hunter, I have always look up to you as a great man who can tame the wind.. You have maintained your calmness and composure amid the roughness of the sea.
" And I see your poems are erasing Ugliness of hate, selfish nationalism terror and.proxy wars Insight of.a.poetess.like you needs the. whole world to be beautiful once again." Beautiful lines from a wonderful poem. For a great man, great poet and.philosopher to say these words meant a lot to me.
A gorgeous poem on Poetess Rose Marie Juan Austin. Acrostic poem that rhymes with the beauty of the soul. When the inner core of the heart is beautiful, the whole world is beautiful too. A most deserving and wonderful poem, Akhtar Sahab.....10
My Great Compliments, Akhtar Sir for this captivating Acrostic poem. May God grant Rose Marie aka Mrs. Juan-Austin a long and healthy life. You have superbly worded this gorgeous poem into a Beautiful Acrostic God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen. a 10++++++++++++++++++++ for the ratings/ Vote
And I see your poems are erasing ugliness of hate selfish nationalism terror and proxy wars. Insight of a poetess like you needs the whole world to be beautiful once again. You are quite right when you wrote here that her poems are erasing ugliness of hate. She represents Beauty-self
Join the whole world Europe, Africa, Australia America and Asia. Nightingales everywhere will sing for you. Your beautiful imaginations know no bounds, Sir! Loveliest!
Make it up all that I see is ugly, rusted beliefs, ideologies stale, evolutionary are your revolutionary rhymes Those revolutionary rhymes, we could all read in her Absolute Power poem POTD recently, WOW! Amazing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I cite these lines from your beautiful and fascinating poem, Akhtar Sir Rhyming I see you. O rose of pink colours, soul's beauty in your fragrance ecstatic I see the whole world is........ A powerful start of the poem about the great poetess and always elegant, indeed most suitable colour that Pink colour. You have mentioned that in my tribute to her.