Sunday, February 28, 2016

Rosy Hues Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wear my vernal love with roses in pastel colour;
Ribbons pink and pearls, my satin-gown adorn;
Jasmine fragrance is the trace of my remembrance;
Melodic notes suave and soft of a piano…
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2018

I am the velvet whisper in your dream, that energizes With tender words half-spoken, resonating from my lips; Those scarlet lips, you fantasized to kiss with ardour, In silent passion, slowly...at the mid-night hour......touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem on love and dream has been nicely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

In pastel colours! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Rajesh Thankappan 02 March 2016

I am an image, a fairy, a sentiment or dream, The one for which your heart has ached and screamed; The one, your mind diffracts it into tantalizing flakes, Which upon your heart have found their place. I Love this stanza with its rich imagery.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 February 2016

Beautifully conceived meaningful poem with it's amazing flow and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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