M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,800 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - Determination - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Embrace an eyelash with tears and cry
a bridge is to cross and a life is to live.
when everything bolts you down
gather courage, hope and faith to fight.

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Epistle


Comments about Rubaiyat - Determination by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/17/2015 3:46:00 AM)


    With tears! But, with hope and dreams in life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/16/2015 11:57:00 AM)


    Flow of words soothe my mind..Music to my ears. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/15/2015 11:35:00 PM)


    Absolutely. Very wise words to follow. thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/15/2015 8:08:00 PM)


    Fantastic. Embrace an eyelash with tears and cry
    a bridge is to cross and a life is to live.....truely envisioned. Thanks for sharing. .....10
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 15, 2015



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