M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,505 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Rubaiyat - In Style. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

With you besides, Love reaches the height of sky,
Attains Zenith of glory, No men can define
Kite crashes past the vacuum of troposphere,
As if, prestigious battle is won in style.

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Ghazal


Comments about Rubaiyat - In Style. by M. Asim Nehal

  • (9/12/2015 5:19:00 AM)


    Nice usage of words..........Good one. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/12/2015 1:26:00 AM)


    Sublimation of love and the great feeling attained in proximity of the loved one are excellent. It also reminds the sweetness of Urdu language. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/12/2015 1:33:00 AM)

    Thanks much Mr. Ratnakar.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2015


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