M. Asim Nehal

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Rubaiyat - Let Me Free - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

This dust will surely settle down, one day.
Yet journey will continue from places to places.
Do not offer me any permanent place to dwell
When life is moving on why should I stay at one place?

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rubaiyat - Let Me Free by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/24/2015 12:35:00 PM)


    Move with life is ultimate message, Asim Liked your poem. God Bless u. (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/23/2015 1:30:00 AM)


    When life is moving on why should I stay at one place?
    This line is enough to inspire one to move on in life. Great great great write!
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  • (10/22/2015 11:57:00 PM)


    Nice Rubai.
    Sometimes.. there are some journeys we travel inside us towards...!
    Most of the time these journeys are banned.
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  • Rajnish Manga (10/22/2015 11:53:00 PM)


    Spiritually Impressive treatment of a man's life and after life which remains seamless. Read it with great interest. Thank you for sharing the poem, M.Asim ji. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2015



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