M. Asim Nehal

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Rubaiyat- Life - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I feel I am waiting like oranges
watching others going through crush machine
Just left with skin no juicy life
are we not following the same pattern!

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rubaiyat- Life by M. Asim Nehal

  • Mihaela Pirjol (11/9/2015 2:25:00 PM)


    A great insight and a wonderful metaphor on the sad truth of the human condition. A very good write! (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/8/2015 12:40:00 AM)


    This a wonderful simile. Loved the concept. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 6:48:00 PM)


    Feeling the walking in path of life is fantastic in fun giving poem. Amazing theme shared really.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2015 9:01:00 AM)


    poets are different, we are full of life!
    thanks Asim-10
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 7, 2015


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