M. Asim Nehal

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Rubaiyat - My Determination - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I am in a prison with the captive soul inside,
My thoughts clash with social norms,
my creativity deals with the narrow minds
Yet my determination forces me to keep my head upright.

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Rubaiyat - My Determination by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/28/2016 2:20:00 AM)


    The captive soul inside! Facing the ways of life on earth. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/22/2015 1:46:00 PM)


    Amusing Rubaiyat..............10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/22/2015 3:18:00 AM)


    yes determination is power that helps us to keep our head straight. great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 21, 2015



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