Rubaiyat - Observation 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Observation 1

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I feel, I am waiting like sugarcanes,
watching others going through crush machine,
Just left with skin no juicy life,
Are we not following the same pattern?

Monday, March 29, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: observation,lessons of life,rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 30 March 2021

Wisely thought.

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RH 30 March 2021

No it doesn't seems. Life is not like sugercane going through the machine. Its sugercane with sweetness in it.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 March 2021

As long as there is life there is hope. Yeah i do feel like that sometimes

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