Rubber Band Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Rubber Band

Rating: 4.9


Go on stretching yourself,
go on stressing yourself,
tie me in the knots of hates,
make marks of your hate on my sensitive skin.
I shall remain peaceful in my strains.
I have nails for all the stings you give,
I shall go on scratching the itches.
I know this scratching ends in a pain.
I have courage to live in the bounds of all your knots,
may be economical, political or psychological.
And I am confident before my scratching injures my skin,
you will exceed your elastic limit
billions of your own molecules will break you,
and all the knots will open one by one.
On that day I shall stripe and expose my skin
to the winds of the soothing love that will blow
to relieve me from the pains of scratching.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 31 May 2018

Your words capture the nature of profound inner stress. A moving verse with great insight into the human condition, Akhtar.

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A great metaphorical write. A thought provoking well written piece.10

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Rini Shibu 09 May 2018

wonderful poem about stress..and presented in unique way..++10

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 May 2018

A great and thoughtful poem, loved reading it.

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Valsa George 09 May 2018

A beautiful write! Like the rubber band, one has to stretch oneself and never break before trials and tribulations! Here the rubber band is used as a great metaphor.... A10

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