! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **rune Of Shadow**! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **rune Of Shadow**! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.7


RUNE OF SHADOW

at this dead of night, rain sizzles
it seems pitch darkness all around
storm on the niche of the mirth
thunder pierces through the black deep
rain hurriedly dashes with hunger

where is the glee lucked in shadows
Elysian deep blue awaits with glow
eyes of crunching heart meanders deep
gloom of canvas stings over the sorrow

pangs of pain runs all through vein
blood oozes out from its anchor
redolence of love riffles in dearth
grin dies beneath green of swing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Thanx for your mail. Your poem is very nice, I must say fantastic but frankly I am yet to comprehend 100%.

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Francesca Martin 12 June 2009

You are wonderful with creating imagery and your word-choice is interseting and effective. Thank you very much for the invite to read this poem

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Kristina B; Williams 11 June 2009

thanks for the invite.i read rune of shadow.thought it was soul piercing.10 all the way....and yeah i do invite you to read my poems too, and would greatly appreciate any feedback

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Elsa Bennett 11 June 2009

I like this poem also. I think some of the imagery you've used is fantastic: 'rain sizzles'/'hurriedly dashes with hunger'... thankyou for sharing.

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Lucero Flores 10 June 2009

I am speachless I give this a 10+++ wow, you need to help me in my poems because mine are nothing compared to yours

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Raven Bishop 16 June 2009

Talks about the things that come out after dark. Nice dark depth to it for the vampire in you. Great for the madness that's all around. This should be the thyme for all war films.

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Ritty Patnaik 14 June 2009

enveloped in sadness this poem brings out the real you.thanks for the invite to read it. rittypatnaik

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DaNa XxX 13 June 2009

hey subhendu, i also liked this poem..! its really nice...well done. ^_^

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Linda Moore 13 June 2009

Such a saddness felt in this writing, anguish, blood oozes out from its anchor, the heart is broken....10 wonderful work

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Ally Rose 12 June 2009

i cant comprehend it completely but it is veru profound and pretty

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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