! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **rune Of Shadow**! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **rune Of Shadow**! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.7


RUNE OF SHADOW

at this dead of night, rain sizzles
it seems pitch darkness all around
storm on the niche of the mirth
thunder pierces through the black deep
rain hurriedly dashes with hunger

where is the glee lucked in shadows
Elysian deep blue awaits with glow
eyes of crunching heart meanders deep
gloom of canvas stings over the sorrow

pangs of pain runs all through vein
blood oozes out from its anchor
redolence of love riffles in dearth
grin dies beneath green of swing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

your poem explains many emotions, and what it's like to expierance them through your eyes. i love the creativity with your words and how it all flows together

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Mitrofan Matei 08 June 2009

i enjoyed reading this poem. the title says it all. the shadow means something dark, lost, dead and rune, in my opinion, appeals to a magical thing that only the poet understands and he shares the meanings through their poetry. this is the opinion of a 13 old boy

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 June 2009

Hello Suhendu Two excellent poems you have written here to add to your outstanding collection the votes and the comments you receive says more about you than any words can ever say, your originality and genius shines through in all of your poems 100 all of the way to you as usual. F Duggan

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Ency Bearis 08 June 2009

a deep thoughts of incantation of the mysterious shadow well implied....

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Ken E Hall 08 June 2009

You carve the words out of darkness and place them on the pages of knowledge to instill the mind...thankyou+++++10 regards uavanice1

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Raven Bishop 16 June 2009

Talks about the things that come out after dark. Nice dark depth to it for the vampire in you. Great for the madness that's all around. This should be the thyme for all war films.

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Ritty Patnaik 14 June 2009

enveloped in sadness this poem brings out the real you.thanks for the invite to read it. rittypatnaik

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DaNa XxX 13 June 2009

hey subhendu, i also liked this poem..! its really nice...well done. ^_^

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Linda Moore 13 June 2009

Such a saddness felt in this writing, anguish, blood oozes out from its anchor, the heart is broken....10 wonderful work

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Ally Rose 12 June 2009

i cant comprehend it completely but it is veru profound and pretty

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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