Runs Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Runs



</>Were are you running?
without rest

I want cover more
Before the sun set

What would you like to be
In the endless sand grains

A seperate Identity
Beyond the idols

Let me do so please
The son is setting

Oh! you acheved
Your own six feet land

The real winner!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 25 August 2011

Rocking horse winner poem.......very well written and articulated......

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Vidi Writes 09 July 2009

Its a breed, dear poet Who always long to be ahead of the rest Wants create a mark of excellence They feel restless to see those who are ahead The 'Run' for the cause... to lead Don't ask them where We can't digest their reply We can't match to their eloquence. Let them run, sure to be tired one day To see what they have left behind. Good one... You need to touch up this write here and there.

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Sandra Fowler 09 July 2009

Very profound. We are all sunset travelers. It is just that some of us reach the west before others do. More than worthy of a ten. Always your friend at poemhunter.. Sandra

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Catrina Heart 08 July 2009

To run away from reality and shadows that hunts us over the years...nice written piece in profoundness! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 July 2009

Who runs? Running from death or something? Good piece Vinod!

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Vinod Kumar U K

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