Sad Woman Poem by Marieta Maglas

Sad Woman

Rating: 5.0


If I opened my heart to show you
The love I could keep inside of me,
You will see there's something you can do,
And I would pray for you on my knee.

If you told me that you should leave me
And no longer should I wait for you,
I would tell you, 'I can't set you free,
'Cause for you was all I've tried to do.'

I cannot cope with sadness at night,
Although you had to follow your way.
My heart, once singing its songs of light,
Buries in melancholy, today.

I swim in my ocean of darkness.
I pray in my solitude, I'm pure.
I wait for you, my life is hopeless
I'm not able more woe to endure.


Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

My thoughts are an ocean of darkness, My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure 10

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Jeremy Wright 18 November 2009

A beautifully worded poem, heartfelt and touching. 10

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

nice poem, touching 10

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 September 2009

Very touching poem. Bring back some old memories. Sad but expressed well. I like this poem

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a heartfelt poem... I touched your sadness. your deep expressions were penetrated my soul. great. great.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 January 2010

‘…My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure….’ Excellent line…touchy…hearty… Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Allan O 18 November 2009

loss is a great sadness..i understand...and the oceans of darkness...very nicely written..thank you Marieta ~^..^

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Beatriz Hutton 18 November 2009

Thank you for telling me about it! I think I understand it 10

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Gwenda Madison 18 November 2009

Amazing poem. Very intelligently woven..Great work... 10

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Edward Parsley 18 November 2009

this is such a great poem and the words flow beautifully 10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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