If I opened my heart to show you
The love I could keep inside of me,
You will see there's something you can do,
And I would pray for you on my knee.
If you told me that you should leave me
And no longer should I wait for you,
I would tell you, 'I can't set you free,
'Cause for you was all I've tried to do.'
I cannot cope with sadness at night,
Although you had to follow your way.
My heart, once singing its songs of light,
Buries in melancholy, today.
I swim in my ocean of darkness.
I pray in my solitude, I'm pure.
I wait for you, my life is hopeless
I'm not able more woe to endure.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
'My thoughts are an ocean of darkness, My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure. So might I, waiting you with this hopeless Have tears, that would help me to endure? ' Beautiful poem- nice ending- 10+++
But if I knew you would not come, No longer would I wait for you, For you was all I had built at home, For you was all I tried to do..... if i knew u would come then i would have waited with rose petals.. what a lovley ida behind poemm.. i liked the idea...10 read mine... home bound.. come home... buttterflies around and no separate ways... all in one thought and may augment ur views
I love this poem! You express your feelings in a deep and very sensible way! thank you for sharing
‘…My solitude is a chosen pray, is pure….’ Excellent line…touchy…hearty… Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK
loss is a great sadness..i understand...and the oceans of darkness...very nicely written..thank you Marieta ~^..^
Thank you for telling me about it! I think I understand it 10
this is such a great poem and the words flow beautifully 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My thoughts are an ocean of darkness... I like this sentence.