Seema Jayaraman

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Salty Sea Breeze - Tanka - Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Rounding the bend
Of a sine curved sealink
Assault salty breeze
cul de sac freed
Tangy Sea Mistiness
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Seema Jayaraman,13 Jan 2016

Topic(s) of this poem: sea, wind

Form: Tanka

Comments about Salty Sea Breeze - Tanka by Seema Jayaraman

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/14/2016 8:06:00 AM)

    But, we need salt. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Seema Jayaraman (1/14/2016 11:53:00 PM)

    Yes that's true Edward, what is life without salt..

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/13/2016 12:55:00 PM)

    Superb poem...............I liked it, thanks for sharing 10+++++ (Report) Reply

    Seema Jayaraman (1/14/2016 11:53:00 PM)

    Thank you Nehal, happy you enjoyed

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 13, 2016

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