Friday, May 19, 2006

Sand Castle's Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pails and Pots
sticks I brought
spoons and shovels
'Lets Go', Mum yells
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David Darbyshire
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Dee Daffodil 21 July 2006

Dave...That's the really great thing about sand castles...you get to build them again and again...and each one only takes a short time, and you can try a new design each and every time...love em...and lookin forward to some soon! ! Hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 19 May 2006

Very nice Dave, Love the title. Patricia Gale

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Esther Leclerc 19 May 2006

Ah yes, the days of sand castles and wavy warriors -! Sweet, Dave, very. : ]

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Ray Forever 19 May 2006

Deja Vu? Beautiful poem with a metaphor to our life

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