Sand Castle's Poem by David Darbyshire

Sand Castle's

Rating: 5.0


Pails and Pots
sticks I brought
spoons and shovels
'Lets Go', Mum yells

Rich beautiful sand
packed in the Pan
smack it on the ground
made a nice mound

castle starts to form
waters nice and warm
Flag pole on the top
having fun, can't stop

Our fort is ready, done
First prize we won
A wave comes up on shore
Our castle is gone? No More

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 21 July 2006

Dave...That's the really great thing about sand castles...you get to build them again and again...and each one only takes a short time, and you can try a new design each and every time...love em...and lookin forward to some soon! ! Hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 19 May 2006

Very nice Dave, Love the title. Patricia Gale

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Esther Leclerc 19 May 2006

Ah yes, the days of sand castles and wavy warriors -! Sweet, Dave, very. : ]

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Ray Forever 19 May 2006

Deja Vu? Beautiful poem with a metaphor to our life

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