Sand Or Water? Poem by Aufie Zophy

Sand Or Water?

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I was enjoying my time on the beach, reminiscing:
If my position would be marked on a world map
Not a person on earth would be able to see
Whether my feet were in the water or in the sand
If my position, on a map of my village would be,
Many 'd be sure that my feet were in the sand
As I would be visibly located on the land.
But that was not matching fully reality:
My feet were just suspended in the air
At the end of my lazy chair. :)

Thursday, August 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reality,thinking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2018

The occurring of many thoughts in enjoying beach have been fantastically delineated in this poem. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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