Thursday, December 31, 2009

Sands Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

i walked along the oceans shores
with a hundred thoughts on my mind
trying to get the answers in that period of time.
does love only come once in our lifetime?
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louis rams
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Kranthi Pothineni 05 January 2010

Good feel and flow of your lines made my read memorable. Very finely penned.

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a fine poem bro. truly.. i love the poem.. as usual.

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Christine Kerr 31 December 2009

You love throwing in the loops Louis. I was just glad to see more of whats inside you beside everything else that is out there. I think, That big space is also a simble for everything to come in the New Year Year. Hope your is a good one.

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