Satuday Night Yet No Fever Poem by me poet yeps poet

Satuday Night Yet No Fever

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The current in my inner skin
today does sting
like sharply pointed
nine pins

the week end is going to be dry
Saturday and Sundays
all everything closed
no surprise nothing to try

where into the garbage bin of time
can we ourselves dispose
early morning we all rose

the sun was keen to peep in
but scratching inside doors
kept me sighing

the clouds requested the sun
to wait
the poet now sleeps
though late

I hear the silent laughter and get up straight
pull the curtains and welcome come my sun

Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,poetic expression,virus
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These days of continued deprivation six feet apart maskedno hugs no lips
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 09 September 2020

Johny was a little guy Eating sugar every day Telling papa no anyway Drooling saliva telling story Time to hop out of oldy Construct new way Most satisfactory.

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Varsha M 09 September 2020

Getting your heart's desire is rewarding Rendering other's heart's desire satisfying. Weekends can never be drying As sun enters your house scattering Light that brightens your being Lovely is the feel as rays crawling To enlighten every darkness troubling. Positivty poetry full of expectation and hope.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 September 2020

so manny emails PH why no comments posted on my age some problems eh

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Srijita Mondal 11 September 2020

" I hear the silent laughter and get up straight pull the curtains and welcome come my sun" Great imagery...🙏

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2020

so many emails comments illey

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 September 2020

the clouds requested the sun to wait the poet now sleeps though late ......nice Poet sleeps full with dream on the blooming buds of roses under the peeping sun through the bluish clouds Poet will awake Holiday will greet his awakening with no fear of assailant Poet will write a piece of historical life where love is evergreen flower

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Anjandev Roy 09 September 2020

welcome come my sun.......great expression......thank u.........anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 September 2020

, , , , , , , , , , , , , so manny emails PH why no comments posted on my age some problems eh

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