Screaming Silence Poem by Ananda Alves
Screaming Silence
Just a few doubts to make one sure.
Just a few mistakes to make one regret.
Just a few memories to make one forget.
So many issues to block one's acts.
So many scars to mark one's soul.
So many lies to remind one's past.
A hundred thoughts but just one head.
A thousand pictures to a single mind.
A million feelings in just one heart.
Uncountable emotions like sadness and violence.
Unconscious postures of self indulgence.
Unbearable screams culminating in silence.
Hi Ananda. This is loaded with fresh angles. The idea is clever and you've made good use of it by not overdoing it. And there's a theme there that the reader can understand and identify with. Fine writing all round. (I'll message you later with a suggestion for one little change) . The best to you, jim xx
Awesome! You should write more. A good piece. Wish you all the best.Take care.
and i love the last line..if these are your first fruits i'm really looking forward to more
A very great poem. Especially A million feelings in just one heart. Very nice
cool. i never seen a poem written so good by kind of repeating itself. good job.
beautiful. a good effort to capture the echoe and sounds of silence. keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 11:17:43 AM # 1.0.0
wonderful work. i agree with mary keep writing.