Sealed Fate Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sealed Fate

Rating: 5.0


It is as usual
I find it casual
Heart is beating as normal
I am perfectly human animal

I had praised at last time
To help me come back same sometimes
I had breathing problem
That really worried them

At this time, I thought of temporary phase
That gloom descended on face
My face was turning pale
I believed in all those heavenly tales

I was treated with no fear
But inward pain I had to bear
It was taking me to heavenly gate
I was worried about my fate

Soon I decided to leave
All worries to Him and behave
It was not my subject
I need to worry and act

No one can steal
If I have to depart in real
My fate is sealed in cover
That shall remain so forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 09 June 2014

A beautifully written poem on how to a certain degree we really have no control over when our final day on this earth will be. All the more reason to be sure to live each day to the fullest and hold close and treasure the momentswith those we love. Nicely done Mehta!

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welcome lena bass ford n shujat ahmed June 6 at 9: 50pm · Unlike · 1

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OK, but disjointed Diane Baril42 minutes ago Lot's of emotion, but a little difficult to follow. Could be a little less disjointed.

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very deep, not insightful but overall depicted a very vivid visual Alexandra Carames42 minutes ago wording was a little off, but there was a very powerful flow Comment 0

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It is as usual I find it casual

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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