Spring: Haiku
Life awakening
Flower opens in the sun
A world is reborn
Summer: Haiku
Warm sun on the ground
A flower growing stronger
Life under the sun
Fall: Haiku
Darkening Shadows
Flower drifts to gentle sleep
The world is resting
Winter: Haiku
Blankets of cold white
Flower hidden from the cold
Life waiting for spring
© JPM 11/13/08
A well thought out poem depicting the effects of the different seasons on nature. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jim and do remain enriched.
I would love to use your spring haiku for my calligraphy homework. It would not be used for commercial purposes and you will be credited. Thank you!
A fine line of haikus. You've done a good job. Enjoyed each one.
..........the flower is one of the most special creations of the cosmos....enjoyed...
I like them. It so so nice to see that poets still acknowledge the traditional form in more than just the syllable count. Beautifall images.
There is one line in it that has eight syllables instead of seven, it's the Fall Haiku and the second line.
no it doesn't