Secret Poem by Santhi Janardanan

Secret

Rating: 5.0


The sun's beautiful rays
pierced my eyes,
captured my little heart.
I was a bit shy
And turned away
slowly whispering,
oh sun don't reveal to the world that my heart brims with a secret love...

Tuesday, February 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loved this beautiful poem. Nice love poem

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Santhi Janardanan 26 February 2024

Thanks for your appreciation 🙏

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Koffi B Sossou 03 May 2024

Was in hurry to give 5 stars. What a nice poem! Sounds like the first flirt.

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Made a revisit today. Enjoyed the poem once again

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2024

Wishing you, Happy Women's DAY today on the 8 March PoemHunter's Time, with the best regards and smiles from Sylvia Frances Chan, The Netherlands

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Santhi Janardanan 11 March 2024

Thank you so much Sylvia.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2024

A Cutest Crystal Clear Composition is my final vision in this loveliest Love poem. Shyness shines scintillatingly especially in the last line. Congratulations as The Member Poem Of The Day!

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Santhi Janardanan 11 March 2024

Thank you so much. I appreciate your wonderful comments. Made me so happy to read.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2024

Secret love.... loved this wonderful poem

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Santhi Janardanan 11 March 2024

Thank you so much Dr. Dhilip

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