~ Sedation Of Salvation ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Your word using abilities are unflappable, eclipsed only by your punctuality in timing. This poem is like a rope into the sky.

Deep intellectual thoughts garnished with wonderful choice of words. Just loved it. Kudos!

Lord Krishna says in Bhagwad Gita that one should do his duty leaving the fruits of labour in the Lord's hands. This is one kind of unattached karmic action which leads to salvation ultimately. You have rightly brought this effect in your poem.

Very intriguing. It certainly sticks out from other poems I've read. Very deep and philosophical. I like it.

Accelerate my momentum Swell like snow ball To savor passionate karmic Flip-fab side of life! ...The intriguing thing I find about reading a John Grisham is his opening lines... I find myself reciting this opening stanza over and over again. Cant get over it. The flexibility in the structure of the stanza and its rhythmic flow really opens it up for one to enjoy. It puts me so close to my beliefs and leaves me living on the flip-fab side of life. Well done 10/10

Extremely joyous to read this poem Reminds me R.N.Tagore's [RNT] wrote., '...let attachment be gate way to salvation...' Poet made some translation of RNT...may be in subconscious this clicked to write this poem Philosophical outfit made this poem splendorous Indeed a classy Regards

Dispassionate Karma [DP] and Passionate Karma [PK]...very aptly poemed...giving 'upper-hand' to PK....accepting all hurdles and loads...bravo.... DP is also a path of Karma Yoga...where I [read ego] is muffled or vestiged... Seers / Sages advocate DP....here Poet in favor of PK Excellent poem... opening avenue for thinking ten+++

Fascinating write, you have spelled out many thoughts of looking at Karma which opened my eyes. I love your flow and style and really most of you works make one think. Great write.

when the mind is busy with the I, how can eye see the reality

I trully like your style, very well expression of emotions...great job