~ Sedation Of Salvation ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ Sedation Of Salvation ~
~ Sedation Of Salvation ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
4 July,2010
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Humble Note:
[1] Dispassionate Karma: Without being attached to the fruits of activities, for by working without attachment one attains the Supreme [a.k.a Salvation]
[2] Passionate Karma: Antithesis to above
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Accelerate my momentum
Swell like snow ball
To savor passionate karmic
Flip-fab side of life!
Smooch sore - sauce
Sour - sweet
Sting - zing of
Passionate karma
Than dwindle frictional frazzle
Of dispassionate one!
Clamp wear and tear
Passionate karma metal ball why?
Decelerate inertia
Eschew embargo
Fab-flab-side of dispassionate
Karmic floridity of life!
I love to enjoy life chord
Thru bondage of karma cord
Than un-bondaged karma!
Seers and sages make
Salvation as focus
Their lofty indulgence locus
Ultimating in convergence.
Divergence my property
Karmic liberty
Accept all
Flop lollipop
Fop hip hop!
Sedation of salvation
Why be slave of?
Dispassion is opium
Passion is my summum bonum.
Offering O' Salvation
Garnish gun salutation
You’re but just isolation.
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Summum bonum [Latin] ~ The supreme good in which all moral values are included or from which they are derived.
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Excellent work Nivedita. The philosophic subject is very beautifully narrated with a different style.
You have presented unconventionally a deep philosophy. It's a very intriguing poem that in the end reveals how in isolation the self is delivered by none other than self itself. Excellent!
Extremely joyous to read this poem Reminds me R.N.Tagore's [RNT] wrote., '...let attachment be gate way to salvation...' Poet made some translation of RNT...may be in subconscious this clicked to write this poem Philosophical outfit made this poem splendorous Indeed a classy Regards
Dispassionate Karma [DP] and Passionate Karma [PK]...very aptly poemed...giving 'upper-hand' to PK....accepting all hurdles and loads...bravo.... DP is also a path of Karma Yoga...where I [read ego] is muffled or vestiged... Seers / Sages advocate DP....here Poet in favor of PK Excellent poem... opening avenue for thinking ten+++
Fascinating write, you have spelled out many thoughts of looking at Karma which opened my eyes. I love your flow and style and really most of you works make one think. Great write.
when the mind is busy with the I, how can eye see the reality
I trully like your style, very well expression of emotions...great job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 4:01:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A very unusual way of writing. But beautifully written. Well penned. Thanks for sharing with me 10++