Why hack my mind?
I can be bare and nude.
Why do hush-hush eye scallop?
My chaste boobs
I can strip off veil for revel
Why scope scoop tangently lips?
Lend red from beguiling xx blood
To satiate you lip hunger.
Why itch psychically in
Nibble nimble thighs and triangle
Dive dip deep in horripilant
River Ganga Yamuna
I can lay bedecking billow bed.
Together for sure
Flush all impure
Into unmarred pure
Make us’ your n’ your.
Why then hack my She?
Stop hacking Stop itching Stop scooping Stop scoping. good writings.
I liked the inner stroke of your poem. Great....... Take care
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WOOW! ! , , , So good... loved it..
The poet goes deep into unexplored regions of mystery. Ganga and Yamuna bedecks the bed. Excellent
I agree to Kelsey Hartmann.Strong wordings to suit the theme.
A brilliant write! Bold and strong in thoughts...loved too much.
This is a deep showing of your disgust at being taken advantge of. If we have you, why exploit you. This is great but I ask you to let me know if my inerpretation is even close
The protest is bold but somewhere it reminded me of Taslima Nasreen's use of bare words sometimes bordering round obscenity or vulgarity. Literature, or more specifically, poetry should imply more leaving it upon the reader to conjure the meaning. Same ideas could have been expressed using more subtle words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Like telling him 'be gentle to me as you touch'. A sensual poem beautifully written.