MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Sedation Of Salvation ~

~ Sedation Of Salvation ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
4 July,2010
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Humble Note:

[1] Dispassionate Karma: Without being attached to the fruits of activities, for by working without attachment one attains the Supreme [a.k.a Salvation]

[2] Passionate Karma: Antithesis to above

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Accelerate my momentum
Swell like snow ball
To savor passionate karmic
Flip-fab side of life!

Smooch sore - sauce
Sour - sweet
Sting - zing of
Passionate karma
Than dwindle frictional frazzle
Of dispassionate one!

Clamp wear and tear
Passionate karma metal ball why?

Decelerate inertia
Eschew embargo
Fab-flab-side of dispassionate
Karmic floridity of life!

I love to enjoy life chord
Thru bondage of karma cord
Than un-bondaged karma!

Seers and sages make
Salvation as focus
Their lofty indulgence locus
Ultimating in convergence.

Divergence my property
Karmic liberty
Accept all
Flop lollipop
Fop hip hop!

Sedation of salvation
Why be slave of?

Dispassion is opium
Passion is my summum bonum.

Offering O' Salvation
Garnish gun salutation
You’re but just isolation.



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Summum bonum [Latin] ~ The supreme good in which all moral values are included or from which they are derived.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 4, 2010
Poem Edited: Friday, July 9, 2010

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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (4/26/2012 10:43:00 AM)

    Extremely joyous to read this poem

    Reminds me R.N.Tagore's [RNT] wrote., '...let attachment be gate way to salvation...' Poet made some translation of RNT...may be in subconscious this clicked to write this poem

    Philosophical outfit made this poem splendorous

    Indeed a classy

    Regards

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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/18/2012 1:10:00 PM)

    Dispassionate Karma [DP] and Passionate Karma [PK]...very aptly poemed...giving 'upper-hand' to PK....accepting all hurdles and loads...bravo....

    DP is also a path of Karma Yoga...where I [read ego] is muffled or vestiged...

    Seers / Sages advocate DP....here Poet in favor of PK

    Excellent poem... opening avenue for thinking

    ten+++

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  • Kevin Carney (12/2/2010 8:14:00 PM)

    Fascinating write, you have spelled out many thoughts of looking at Karma which opened my eyes. I love your flow and style and really most of you works make one think. Great write.

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  • Narender Singh Bansal (10/28/2010 9:19:00 AM)

    when the mind is busy with the I, how can eye see the reality

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  • Jorge Campos (9/6/2010 6:53:00 PM)

    I trully like your style, very well expression of emotions...great job

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  • Satan EsquireSatan Esquire (8/8/2010 4:20:00 PM)

    Your word using abilities are unflappable, eclipsed only by your punctuality in timing. This poem is like a rope into the sky.

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  • Venkatesh Jagannathan (8/1/2010 2:53:00 AM)

    Deep intellectual thoughts garnished with wonderful choice of words. Just loved it.
    Kudos!

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (7/30/2010 6:12:00 AM)

    Lord Krishna says in Bhagwad Gita that one should do his duty leaving the fruits of labour in the Lord's hands. This is one kind of unattached karmic action which leads to salvation ultimately. You have rightly brought this effect in your poem.

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  • Alex Fischer (7/28/2010 1:32:00 PM)

    Very intriguing. It certainly sticks out from other poems I've read. Very deep and philosophical. I like it.

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  • David Beckham (7/26/2010 4:00:00 PM)

    Accelerate my momentum
    Swell like snow ball
    To savor passionate karmic
    Flip-fab side of life!

    ...The intriguing thing I find about reading a John Grisham is his opening lines...

    I find myself reciting this opening stanza over and over again. Cant get over it. The flexibility in the structure of the stanza and its rhythmic flow really opens it up for one to enjoy. It puts me so close to my beliefs and leaves me living on the flip-fab side of life. Well done 10/10

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (7/21/2010 3:23:00 PM)

    A very philosophical view and a deep insight

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (7/21/2010 10:50:00 AM)

    I love the latin definition.

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  • Ajay Seshadri (7/19/2010 11:06:00 AM)

    You have presented unconventionally a deep philosophy. It's a very intriguing poem that in the end reveals how in isolation the self is delivered by none other than self itself. Excellent!

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  • C N Prem KumarC N Prem Kumar (7/19/2010 3:01:00 AM)

    Excellent work Nivedita. The philosophic subject is very beautifully narrated with a different style.

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (7/19/2010 2:31:00 AM)

    A very unusual way of writing.
    But beautifully written.
    Well penned.
    Thanks for sharing with me
    10++

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  • Milica Franchi De Luri (7/18/2010 9:18:00 PM)

    Karma is heard to understand, especially for someone that questions and intellectualizes everything. It must be a great benefit to a person that excepts theories of religious or spiritual nature, it must bring on calmness and a relaxed state of mind - sedation, that Leeds to salvation...........lovely poem....10

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  • Anita Trivedi (7/18/2010 5:02:00 AM)

    Your just a poem have given lot to learn....... Great write....... Really a very different way of writing...... So much in flow... Want to say just loved it..... Take care.

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  • Juan OlivarezJuan Olivarez (7/17/2010 9:03:00 PM)

    though my small intellect does not understand all of karma and the like. I love this poem, it is built fromt the ground up and flows so well I just love it. congrats ms nivedita

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  • Dale Mullock (7/17/2010 2:34:00 PM)

    Hello Nivedita!

    Now this is a very free-flowing poem with some excellent skip along rhyme that makes it very accessible to all readers despite it quite a diverse setting and karmic soul. I love the elated and vibrant flow of words that make this so catchy! The thought behind it all is your spirit driven purpose and the flow of life and how we could be free if we let our hearts to be! The salvation for me is to participate, to get involved and to interact with other people or other things in this world... not to be dispondant from it, even if the world is negative and force you to be reclused.

    Excellent thought and happy go lucky poem, love the aura it generates. Well written indeed. Good for you Niv, keep up the good writing!

    Dale :)

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (7/17/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    'Sedation Of Salvation' I've read several times.My comment is short, Since I do not have a 'Theology or Ideaology' I just live my life moment to moment with an understanding of life's cycle. I love this stanza:
    Divergence my property
    Karmic liberty
    Accept all
    Flop lollipop
    fop hip hop
    You gather events, ideas, et al and make magnifcent poems. Thanks for sharing.

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