~ ENIGMATIC NAVEL ~
Ms. Nivedita.
UK.21.10.09.
Oi
Why cave navel?
Unveil
Navigate I’ll
Keep not enigmatic.
Your enigmatic navel
A makeshift
From mother fixation
Of neonatehood
To fiancée fixation
Of younghood
Is my visual cuddle.
Put on low waist jeans
Tattoo butterfly around
Decor with diamond
Navel ring jocund.
Dispel
Silhouette sable.
A romantic trespass
To unravel marvel
Of ballet ruffle.
With glib
Glide gait
Navel-gyrate
Will titrate
Alchemy in
Unfolding of
Petals’ rouleau,
A smiling rose bud
On your enigmatic navel!
Coalescing sweat beads
In vermillion of setting sun
Psychedelic color play
In sparkling diamond
Butterflies zoom out
Heart sweetening
Dance on arc of rainbow
Voluptuously flummox me.
My tryst
Your enigmatic navel,
My noetic ride in
Ebullient tunnel!
In sensuous navel
Bedeck floral travel
Babble twaddle tattle
Oho hoo-oo oho hoo-oo
Why not join you too?
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I loved your sweet distinct voice! Fine diction here! well done!
Distinctively different in content as well as the execution, Almost all your poems, boasts of a streak of modernism in them. Very nice.
A beautiful poem. Creation is indeed great. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
A new style and a new write on navel...its a wonderful piece in itself..loved it..Winnie
In thine poems words are danc'n! Beautiful poem like a beauideal butterfly! ! ! !
Super, I agree the visuals are fantastic. Loved reading this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your distinct style of usuing words in a poem, use of metaphor etc certainly will identity you as a poet of new era, dear Niv. I like this poem.