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Rating: 4.3

A want deep inside;
False hopes, and a vision.
Skeptical fears;
for a fool to be taken.
Within a dream;
beside my world,
You have my heart;
No other can awaken.
My mind hears your whispers;
Two souls meant to be

Its all in your voice;
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Tuesday, May 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
Yiyan Han 25 November 2017

The voice beside one's ear...quite a something to think about :) Good work.

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Deep inside..... a big 10++++++++++++++++++

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 May 2017

A fine allegory. Thanks.

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thank you for the 10+ I usually keep a distance from 'Love poems as much as I can so your thoughts are appreciated.

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thank you your opinion is appreciated

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2017

My mind hears your whispers; Two souls meant to be. soo fine expressions........ whispers were always poeticallllll. soul, mind, love. dreams.. very nice dear poet. thank you for sharing.. tony

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thank you.

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Lyn Paul 23 May 2017

Wonderful to express your thoughts in a mysterious way that leaves the reader thinking.

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thank you for your comment it is very much appreciated.

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