See, Dont See Poem by sreelekha premjit

See, Dont See

Rating: 4.9

We donot see
what we see
even as we see

we rarely hear
what we hear
even as we hear

we donot talk
when we talk
even as we talk

we seldom do
what we do
even as we do

sometimes we donot be
when we be
even as we be

and the same for love

LOVEFOOL Aka 28 January 2009

Very deep and very true, Good write 10+

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 January 2009

We donot see what we see even as we see, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , as we do exist nonexistently as of now tomorrow we don`t exist by time and space today, but we do exist as we are by relativity, excellent proposition redounded by sheer truth, yet it enlightens the grace, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 28 January 2009

love is blind deaf dumb motionless and inactive at its prime where it will breathe love only...good imaginative piece...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 28 January 2009

very nicely written truth, , , even in our relationshipswe are that way we have our picture of everybody and we only talk to the picture not to the person

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Ency Bearis 28 January 2009

nice thoughts...but its true...good write...10

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Rakesh Bhalavi 28 January 2009

its true. thats what we all do these days! ! great work

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